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[divedeep]

There is a lot wrong with this

First off I'm going to comment on the soundtrack. When the music picks up into that hard rock it doesn't end, which leads me to believe that you didn't make the layer that music track was on into a "stream" and have a "stop" key frame at the end of it. Also, why hard rock? Why not some crazy bongo drums to go with what's happening in a scene? That's a mistake many people make, by putting in music that they LIKE instead of what fits.

Another thing I'm going to comment on is the one still shot of the shark you kept on using. I would go back and animate his tail and his gills atleast go give him better movement. Using a still over and over again and just moving it around with tweens is incrediably boring and will lose interest to your audience.

But you did have some nice drawings, so you do have skill there. All I suggest is to keep at it and when you work on something submit it in a place where people can critique it, like the NG Mags section. That and keep practicing at your animating. I hope this critique helps.

[Prehistorik: Episode 1]

I really like the layout

The animation was cute and the subject manner was pretty funny, but to tell the truth I enjoyed the opening sequence a little more. It made me feel like I was watching a real show and with that I think you did a great job.

I look forward to seeing more episodes. :)

[DVP: Fight Knight]

Great job

I think you've done a great job, the action is nice, the pacing is good too although could be a little faster for a fight sequence like when the first two guys were fighting and one of them had brought down their foot into the rock that was behind the guys head. I think that part could have been done faster. But its understandable to slow down since flash could have made the motion clippy.

There was one thing that bothered me though, the wide screen bars seem to large and they seem to squish all that's within the scene. It kinda makes all the forms wider than they should be. But other than that, great job and congrats on being a daily feature.

[The Real Legend]

Oh man...`

Link poll dancing... that's just.... hilarious.

[Sweet Nectar]

The randomness...

I love your timing.... freaking hilarious.

[Angry Dog]

Okay so...

I can totally see this becoming a tv show on adult swim or on comedy central. This is pretty funny, I especially like the use of metaphors and how they didn't really make much sense until the bear stated them clearly, that was great.

Keep at it!

[Spoilsbury Toast Boy - 1]

I have but one question...

How did this get into the "funny's" section? I remember seeing one of the Toast Boy's animations of Deviantart, and somehow I lost it there, and now, here it is again! Yahoo!

But still, how is this funny? These animations are some of the most wonderfully disturbing things I've ever seen.... But how is it funny???

(Still love it though)

[the YuYu]

I would expect nothing less.

I have been a fan of your works for a couple of years now, and if I were ever asked "What animator do you look up too?", I must truthfully say you are probably number 1 on that list.

Your excellent character designs and stories are just great and all around wonderful. And the way you keep pushing flash for the results you want, its just amazing.

You'll always have a fan right here waiting for some more.
Keep em' coming please.

[Red Riding Hood]

It took a week to finally be able to download this

But damn am I glad I tried again.

That was really well done, and the ending was awesome, great laugh and level of suspense with so many familar lines. Great job.

[ViPC -group A-]

Interesting

And at some parts very disturbing. I wasn't expecting the cum shots (if that's what those were) on the pink cat who got shot... And I liked the part with the dude who hung himself and spazed out at the screen. And sweet choice of music too, good song.
Good job.